Puyallup Food BankLogo Design Contest

Hello dear NorthPFB,

I appreciate your feedback as always my friend.

I just can´t work on that cause it wouldn't be an abstract representation of it and would follow my fellow designer in 1st place since it would be a bit close, rules on the website don´t allow us to do it, hope you understand.

But feel free to ask anything else if you need please.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

Can you make the border lines between the circles more like arms?

Hello again NorthPFB,

Hope all is well with you.

Yes sure I can submitted already.

If you need anything more just let me know.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

Any way to make the outer rim look a little more like people? Also, could you include "Food is the first step" somewhere?

The leaves more bold look way better I agree.

Take the time you need my friend. I will be around.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

I like this a lot better! Our board will be reviewing the top 5 tomorrow.

Hello dear NorthPFB,

I appreciate your feedback as always.

Please check revisions and let me know if it´s all okay.

We can remove the star in this case and not replace by anything, sometimes less is more, and it works without it as well.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

...Also could you make the wheat a little thicker? It seems too spindly compared to the rest of the design. Also, I'm not a fan of the star. What else could you put there?

Could you work "food is the first step" into this design?

Could you incorporate "Food is the first step" somewhere?

Hello dear NorthPFB,

Hope you´re having a great day.

Thank you for your great feedback.

Submitted a variation for your appreciation, please check and let me know what do you think.

If you need changes feel free to ask please.

Your feedback is always welcome.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

Love the simplicity of this, and the colors are calming. The graphic is nice, agricultural, but lacking a direct connection to building community around food.