#12 - can you change the font to something less structured, use handwriting style, lower case possibly. change words from black to a colour, or combo of the green & blue, green & orange, or blue & orange. #13 - like the symbol, but too many colours, don't like the yellow. like the use of 2 colors for the words. can you try using a different, less structured font, maybe lower case. thanks
like some aspects of each design. would like a symbol that is less feminine. my target client will be both male and female. would like to see a lighter hue of the greens and oranges. am open to the use of yellow, but in a lighter hue. thanks.