Could you leave it without the slogan please? Is there a reason you used a serif font? Could you try it with a non serif (clean, modern) font, to see how it looks? How about a slight gradient in the egg? Can the egg's shadow be a little diffused?
Thanks for the feedback. The serif font because I guess I was thinking of egg production as a trade with a long history and to sort of convey that aspect. But I think a sans serif will also be effective. I'm uploading a couple versions, the second one the font is just a lighter weight. Also went with blue text to contrast with the green graphic. Please let me know if you'd like to see any other changes. Thank you
Could you add the slogan again to see how it looks? Probably not in italics... one could be in grey and the other in green, just to make it contrast...
Also... I like the blue text contrasting with the green. Is there another tone of blue that you think would look good with that type of green? Maybe a bluer one and not that greenish?
#27 with bluer blue Sorry, I wasn't clear on what you wanted to see in green and gray - did you want to see two versions of the slogan, one green and one gray? That is what I'm uploading. Please let me know if I misunderstood. Thanks
#35 Could you make the PROVUMEX letters in the color that you had in (#27)? The slogan in green, probably just one tone... the one that looks better...