We really like your entries. Could you submit #78, 86, and 93 with provident above the word plumbing? We think this will work better on our shirts, etc. Thanks!
Thank you for the feedback. I've submitted several new options which I think fit best branding wise.
I do have a couple of thoughts I'd like to share though. From a branding perspective I think it's best to emphasize your "provident' rather than both 'provident' and 'plumbing'. The name is unique for a company of your nature and there is a rather unpleasant constrast between the two words.
Also, you should leave the slogan out for the shirt embroidery if you plan to have it small on the chest to avoid cluttering and lack of visibility since the words will come out too small. My suggestion would be to have the icon printed on the back and the logo (icon plus wording) small on the chest left side, or the other way around.
In any case, you need to keep it simple and memorable. Thanks again and if you need any revisions let me know.
Thank you for your help! We have decided that your entry #126 is the favored logo. I am not sure the process for the revisions of the winning design... If I am allowed to do that here, then here ya go! We would like to see the following revisions to entry #126:
1. A little more color in the design. We were thinking a maybe adding a little orange in the windows...
2. We would like there to be less kerning in the letters of plumbing. I would like the word plumbing to stand out a little more, not as much as entry #93. I am not sure if it would look better justified to the left or the right.
3. I agree the tagline looks lost. Could you see if you could come up with a solution to make it stand out a little more?
4. We would love to see this design with the wave extended, simliar to entry #131, or even #125.
Also, if you see this message, and this is not the appropriate way to make you the winner and recieve revisions from you, please let me know. I am going to look it up in the help section now. Thanks!
This looks really good. Just a couple of things. Could you put a thin line between plumbing and the tagline? Also, could you reduce the kerning on plumbing a little more and justify it to the right?