ProTestLogo Design Contest

Dear Makinson!
Your personal avatar contains the letter "o" more of an idea of my logo slogan than the design that you provided for me.

It is unfortunate that you just put in the logo mark of his avatar, even after working on it. Because the idea is good, but requires elaboration. I want my, not your logo

Dear CH,
Apologize for my mistake, lol
my english is very poor.
and I already updated my logo at #13.
Please let me know...

cheers,
makinson

Dear Makinson! I like it but I do not understand the sign - it is better to work on the target (which you put off) and integrate it into a word or letter

I want make target just in red and more simple may be just add black line

Hey guys! I look forward to your response to my comments...

I want make target just in red and more simple may be just add black line

Dear CH,
Apologize for late respond your request.
because I was out of town for the week ahead.
but I will do it now with my notebook.

thanks for your understanding.

I already updated my logo at #94 and #95.
Please let me know...

cheers,
makinson

Lets try make grey in white and just 2 cicle - more simple and alittle bigger

Sorry target in red, red line in target in bold like here https://www.google.ru/search?gs_rn=24&gs_ri=psy-ab&tok=UCQ9X24T96Bl59jsrFoOkA&cp=5&gs_id=i&xhr=t&q=target&newwindow=1&bav=on.2,or.r_cp.r_qf.&bvm=bv.50310824,d.bGE&biw=991&bih=645&um=1&ie=UTF-8&hl=ru&tbm=isch&source=og&sa=N&tab=wi&ei=cEEBUqqzHaWu4QTZwoG4Dg#facrc=_&imgdii=_&imgrc=yFqHEfsQK9GeiM%3A%3BVp96UzJrHMcDYM%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Fwww.darkgovernment.com%252Fnews%252Fwp-content%252Fuploads%252F2013%252F02%252FTarget_image.gif%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Fwww.darkgovernment.com%252Fnews%252Ftarget-practice-are-police-using-images-of-children-and-pregnant-women%252F%3B367%3B367, text in black

Strigth line in white and bold too

Dear CH,
Apologize for my mistake.
and I already updated my logo at #107 and #108.
Please let me know...

cheers,
makinson