Thank you SO MUCH for your hard work over the last days...you were so responsive and always with great ideas, but a last minute option presented itself and I decided to go with that. thanks again and good luck
can you please make a new greyscale version of the logo, which shows the new colours on the leaves of the new logo and the new colour of 'A Method Called Love'?
Yes, I think the small print at the bottom will be easier to read, when the logo is reduced in size.
You know the top three leaves? Could you make 3rd one on the right the same colour as 'Youth' curl it a down a very tiny bit, to emphasise the shape of the heart a little more?
I have had some feedback from my trusted colleague. Please be patient with us, because we are getting close top what we think is going to be a FANTASTIC logo:
Please could you try using the colours from design #36 on this version?
Also, my colleague would like to see a few more leaves re-introduced, to make the a little richer... try 2-3 more leaves, using the different colours from #36,
I wish I knew your name! Thank you so much for your wonderful work!
I think this design and the colours have emerged as my favourite, so far, but I hope we can continue to refine this logo over the next days.
1- Could you please try moving 'Pro Youth' a tiny bit to the left, so that the 'P' is aligned with the 2nd 'h' in 'Philharmonia'? I am awaiting my colleague's feedback before I send you any other ideas.
1- Would it be possible to develop a version of our final logo in greyscale? This might be useful for faxes or on black/white documents.
This is excellent! We are getting closer and closer! Thanks for your patience and your help.
I like the flow and energy of this image. A few refinements:
What colour are the words 'Pro' and 'Philharmonia'? I see these as dark grey at the moment - would prefer midnight blue, if we can find a deep, warm yet imposing colour.
I still worry that 'A Method Called love' is still too difficult to read when the logo is used in small spaces, but we definitely can't make it any bigger... in fact, maybe having it 5% smaller, will allow the line leading to the leaves to be longer and more dynamic. Could you try a slightly darker green for that print? It might help make it easier to read?
For reasons that I can explain later, we are going to have to focus on this design, please, although you should be able to use some of the features you have already developed on the other design. I really feel you are understanding what we are after!
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The new colours you chose on the other design are a lot closer to what we are looking for, but are now a little too dull. We need to make the kaki a touch greener, and what now looks like brown now, needs to go more towards yellow. We need to get a good balance between WARMTH and ENERGY to radiate out of the logo.
Could we try minimising the number of leaves, while retaining the idea of the heart design? A simpler, more modern that avoids being too ornate? Try with 4-7 leaves.
For all the print, could you please try using Calibri font instead? I find it simpler and cleaner.
I think "A Method Called Love" might be difficult to read, when the logo is reduced to a smaller scale - so maybe try increasing the size by about 10% or even 15%.
Finally, we would like to see a version of this design reversed - with the leaves on the right and 'A Method Called Love' starting on the left.
Good luck and thank you for your wonderful ideas so far
I would like to keep this design in contention please, just in case. Obviously, the issue of colours would be the same, and perhaps we could find an even simpler and more modern font.
I will get back to you, if I have any ideas, but so far, I feel you are really understanding what we are trying to express. thanks
Many thanks for the two updated versions with 'warmer colour'. This is still my favourite, because it jumps out of the page, is stronger.
The two new versions are 'warmer', but they are also paler. Could you find warmer tones, that are also a little 'darker' - especially for the green and yellow? Hopefully we are not too far away - these things are difficult to describe in words.
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maybe like this one?
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Is it possible to turn that leaf downwards a little bit, so that the shape of the leaves is a little more like a heart? very little
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You know the top three leaves? Could you make 3rd one on the right the same colour as 'Youth' curl it a down a very tiny bit, to emphasise the shape of the heart a little more?
thanks for your patience
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Thanks for the new options.
I definitely prefer the continuous line at the bottom.
Could you please try 'A Method Called Love" in the same colour as 'Philharmonia'?
thanks again
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please try using the green colour from the leaves on 'A Method Called Love'...it will be easier to read when the logo is reduced to a smaller size.
You could then use the lighter yellow/grey colour for the line and stem.
a million thanks
wissam
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here the revised.
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I have had some feedback from my trusted colleague. Please be patient with us, because we are getting close top what we think is going to be a FANTASTIC logo:
Please could you try using the colours from design #36 on this version?
Also, my colleague would like to see a few more leaves re-introduced, to make the a little richer... try 2-3 more leaves, using the different colours from #36,
Thanks for your patience and for your help.
regards
Wissam
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Here the revised with aligned P with second h.
Please let me know if any other feedback.
Rgds,
Sigit
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I think this design and the colours have emerged as my favourite, so far, but I hope we can continue to refine this logo over the next days.
1- Could you please try moving 'Pro Youth' a tiny bit to the left, so that the 'P' is aligned with the 2nd 'h' in 'Philharmonia'? I am awaiting my colleague's feedback before I send you any other ideas.
1- Would it be possible to develop a version of our final logo in greyscale? This might be useful for faxes or on black/white documents.
Many thanks. I will get back to you soon
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I like the flow and energy of this image. A few refinements:
What colour are the words 'Pro' and 'Philharmonia'? I see these as dark grey at the moment - would prefer midnight blue, if we can find a deep, warm yet imposing colour.
I still worry that 'A Method Called love' is still too difficult to read when the logo is used in small spaces, but we definitely can't make it any bigger... in fact, maybe having it 5% smaller, will allow the line leading to the leaves to be longer and more dynamic. Could you try a slightly darker green for that print? It might help make it easier to read?
A million thanks to you for your creative work
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The new colours you chose on the other design are a lot closer to what we are looking for, but are now a little too dull. We need to make the kaki a touch greener, and what now looks like brown now, needs to go more towards yellow. We need to get a good balance between WARMTH and ENERGY to radiate out of the logo.
Could we try minimising the number of leaves, while retaining the idea of the heart design? A simpler, more modern that avoids being too ornate? Try with 4-7 leaves.
For all the print, could you please try using Calibri font instead? I find it simpler and cleaner.
I think "A Method Called Love" might be difficult to read, when the logo is reduced to a smaller scale - so maybe try increasing the size by about 10% or even 15%.
Finally, we would like to see a version of this design reversed - with the leaves on the right and 'A Method Called Love' starting on the left.
Good luck and thank you for your wonderful ideas so far
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I would like to keep this design in contention please, just in case. Obviously, the issue of colours would be the same, and perhaps we could find an even simpler and more modern font.
I will get back to you, if I have any ideas, but so far, I feel you are really understanding what we are trying to express. thanks
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looking for deeper, warmer, darker, natural colours. Not easy!!
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The two new versions are 'warmer', but they are also paler. Could you find warmer tones, that are also a little 'darker' - especially for the green and yellow? Hopefully we are not too far away - these things are difficult to describe in words.
Many thanks for your help so far
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