Entry #5....Looks great, I love the three balls at the end. I would love it, if maybe those looked like diamonds. and hade the motto underneat it like in Entry #3. I also like the tiara you used on Entry #3 w/o the doves, rather than the tiara in Entry #5. I would prefer no doves. The doves have no significants to the organization. I also like the light shining down on the tiara (that was great) in Entry #3. Love the script and would like that same scrpit however you do not have to bold print International Inc. or maybe try it in pink and purple instead of the yellow...even though I wanted yellow to be incoroprated, I'm not sure how you can do that and it still keep it's elegance. Great job so far. Let's see what these changes look like.
Sorry just thought about something what if you used a diamond in place of the dove. in between of the tiara and the org. name. Also the tiara should have some bling on it. So, it looks more danity. Princess-sey! LOL
Dear contest holder greetings, thank you for the feedback, I am working on your requirements. The birds are not doves, they are swans I used them because they represent grace and beauty. Kind regards
Thank you for your response...grace and beauty...didn't realize. Nice touch, but I like where you are going with # 7 the most. It really stands out to me. With the changes suggested we can possibly start ranking. I wanted to wait until it was the epitome of what represented the organization. I look forward to seeing your adjustments. Thank you for your time. Blessings, SH
I'm sorry I made a mistake that was caught about an hour ago. The (...) actually go infront of fearfully, not at the end. So it should look like this...
OK, so I'll be honest with you. So far with your work I like # 7 the best. However, I would like Princess and Club on the same line. You can leave the crown, the black background, the diamonds, The font for Princess the same. However this are the changes I want you to make to number 7 only.
Unforunately, the motto is unreadable. So, we might need to change the font to something that is not cursive yet stays the same side, smaller than Princess Club. I love the Princess Club coloring in # 6. So can you change the color of Princess Club from # 6 and add it to # 7, along with the background (make it black). Lastly, let's drop the (...) and just leave it as (fearfully and wonderfully made for purpose). Remember it is all lower case. I don't want you to change international Inc. coloring in #7 or if you do let's try it in white, with the intention of being open to going back to the purple. Just the Princess Club is being changed to the #6 coloring!!! The rest of #7 works best, with the diamonds at the bottom...not on the sides. If we can work that out...I think I can start ranking them to either let people let you win or compete against you...smile!!!!
Tell me if you think the circle in #5 aroung the logo, would work in #7 around the logo...without moving the crown would work??? Just wondering...I actually liked that, but can't visualize if it would work. If it would be to much stuff going on.
PS. Just wanted you to know, I Love the green and yellow logo, but I can only purchase one logo at a time, LOL. The coloring is wonderful...but I love the black, pink. white, and silver a little better.