ithink this is still the best one. on the recent updates you made the orange line along the bow too large - the way you did it here is perfect - very thin and subtle... it looks perfect.
Lets try this same graphic with a coulpe of variations on the lines - without and with white and with orange...
Opposed to the Large Boat Graphic - I gave you some feedback on another version... a logo something like this... instead of the large Boat Graphic... I'll send in an email...
I would be happy to work on this more to get it just right.
I also thought the ones with the white boat became to much that is why I thought the silhouette looked cleaner. In this phase only first place can submit.
I do like this... but feedback I am getting is that this is too heavy (the graphic up top)... most people are liking the concept of a LOGO that could be easily identitified with our brand... like a moniker such as the "Porsche" logo - when you see it yuou think Porsche... I want to try a variation of this logo (leavign ALL of the Text as it - everyone likes that - especially the Palm Beach part - the Primo Yachts font can still be worked a little)... and just have a simple line drawing elegant stylized type logo - and then somethign more formal liek the Porsche logo (but NOt the actual Porsche logo)...
I do like BOTH of these fonts - maybe the Primo Yachts can be a little thinner of a Font - not so heavy - but the SAME STyle...? Also maybe have the circle that is orange reflect a change in color to be like a sunset... from darker to lighter?
Maybe we try a version with teh Boat being WHITE with a slight light brown accent along the Bowline in front (if you look at the Mag Bay pictures you will see the TEAK TRIM along the front of the boat)... something like that if possible? you coudl even turn the boat slightly more TOWARD the viewer to show that bowline better... but just slightly
Try like a sunset orange for the Circle above the boat... and then maybe also just a lighter more subtle color... make the waves UNDER the boat less prominent... try to lighten up the feel of the graphic somewhat
I’ll work on that when I get home. I google ice blue but of course it came back with so many :) I can make it an exact color even after the contest.
Thank you!!
I like this one... but Iike the combination of the half circle above the boat and the Palm Beach text in the light blue... this color is more of a turquioise - see if you can get it closer to Ice Blue - which is like a Tiffany blue or a Robin Egg Blue - a very soft light blue...
I like this one too... I like the lettering of the Palm Beach - but use a different font for the Primo Yachts - NOT futuristic font - something strong and classic... but not too bold...
same feedback on the boat graphic as in my pther post.
This has potential as well... can you make the boat seem a little larger - give it a second row of seats - and use the ICE BLUE color and a slightly lighter grey for the outline... and maybe thin out the outline a bit giving it a slightly more elegant feel... also the back corner of the boat is a sharp almost 90 degree angle... in reality the boat has a softer rounded corner (the back top corner just before the engines appear)
I can make all the modifications or variations you might need. I'm here to help even long after the contest ends.
Thank you for this opportunity - Kent
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Same feedback as on the one that is #... keep the orange line along the bow thin and subtle...
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Lets try this same graphic with a coulpe of variations on the lines - without and with white and with orange...
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I also thought the ones with the white boat became to much that is why I thought the silhouette looked cleaner. In this phase only first place can submit.
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Trajan Pro (very close, used often in luxury and formal contexts)
Garamond (Adobe Garamond, EB Garamond) – elegant with similar proportions
Bodoni – has a strong contrast and sharp serifs
Didot – refined, high-contrast serif style
And the Cursive you have for Palm Beach is PERFECT!
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Trajan Pro (very close, used often in luxury and formal contexts)
Garamond (Adobe Garamond, EB Garamond) – elegant with similar proportions
Bodoni – has a strong contrast and sharp serifs
Didot – refined, high-contrast serif style
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Thank you!!
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same feedback on the boat graphic as in my pther post.
Use ICE BLUE instead of seafoam green...
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Thank you for this opportunity - Kent