Ill move you to first soon... I am liking the graphic with teh Outriggers showing... it needs that... this one is Great... can you try a couple variations on the Script font - something even more Flowy with larger loops for the P and the B... also maybe a slightly lighter Blue for the Palm Beach part...
I will move you to first soon... but still want to play with the font a bit... it runs together too much (the Primo font)... also the OF in the Of Palm Beach is too large... smaller so the emphasis is on Palm Beach... and if you can fine a more flowy and "Larger Looping Circles" type script font - GREAT!
Ive placed you in first... can you try to use a Script font that is more Thin Lines, Handwritten in style and large looping flowing letters...
ALSO - lets try a version where the boat is simplified... take away the tall outrigger lines on top of the boat... take away the four "posts" that hold up the rook... lets see how that looks - more stylized and subtle...
Hi Sir, at this stage of the contest, only the design with the rating "1st" finisher can submit. Is there any way for me to submit a new, revised design? Thank you.
Im wondering how it would look if you removed the four "posts holding up the roof... to give it even a cleaner more stylized or "flowy line drawing" sort of look...?
May I know what you want, sir?
First of all, I apologize, sir, if I cannot send private messages (currently) during the contest, as it is against the rules.
However, I can send private messages through my LT account/personal email after the contest ends. I hope you understand what I mean :)
I like the way the Palm Beach is off to the right - nice touch... Need ot modify the font still - its too heavy... send me a private message and I can show you more of what I like
Thank you for your feedback sir. I have worked on it, and I sent some new Script fonts including Patung and Cervanttis. #691#692#693#694#695 please check, if there is any shortcomings do not hesitate to contact me. Thank you
Getting a lot of good feedback on this logo... the negative is that it limits us somewhat on style of boat... a nd the graphic is too busy... lets try to STYLIZE the graphic a bit - take the seats out... simplify the roof line and make it more subtle in terms of the type of boat - more like a line drawing that "Symbolizes " a sleek boat similiar to the magbay but not to the point of pinpointing exaclty the type of boat... leaving a little to the imagination... also can we try the Of Palm Beach in a handwritten , thin elegant script font similiar to :
Patung or Cervanttis
I've sent designs with some more classic fonts. Please check them out. Is there a font you like? Or perhaps you have a suggestion? If so, please feel free to contact me. Thank you :)
I LIKE this one - you captured the double row of seating... the small bump on the roof can go away to give it a cleaner look - and try the logo with a couple of other fonts - this font is a little to futuristic... something more classic - a strong clean font...
Can you modify the boat silouette to be more like the T-TOP view from the side of hte MAGBAY 43? This looks more like a Cruising Yacht and woudl be better to have it more closely reporesent the lines of a LARGE CENTER CONSOLE boat specifically MAGBAY 43. Google Center Console 43 Magbay Flare
Thank you for your Rating. I've sent you some new designs, including the italic font. Please check and What do you think? Is there anything I need to improve? Please let me know if you'd like to see any revisions (font, color, layout, etc.). Thank you :)
Hello Sir, Congratulations on launching your new project. This is my proposal for your project. What do you think? Please let me know if you would like to see any revisions (fonts, colors, layout, etc.). Thanks
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First of all, I apologize, sir, if I cannot send private messages (currently) during the contest, as it is against the rules.
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Is everything okay sir? Or maybe there is still something missing, If so, don't hesitate to let me know. Thank you
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