Primo Yachts of Palm BeachLogo Design Contest

Thank you for your feedback, I will make a revision, but the contest has entered the selection stage so I don't know how to submit a revised design, only the designer who has ranked 1st can submit a revision, do you have any suggestions for me to submit?,
regards:)

This is nice - but need to change the font used in the "Of Palm Beach" to an elegant handwritten Script type font like:

Cervantis or Patung - something like this that is Flowy and Elegant and Thin... and maybe at slight curve up... with Emphaiss on Palm Beach and the of being smaller

please check

oke :)

Can we try this with a different color than the brown... maybe a light blue... and the font still isnt right... the Palm Beach letters are too heavy and close together... and Primo Yachts is too tall and stretched... play with the fonts

didot font

Bodoni font

Trajan Pro font

Adobe Garamond font

oke :)

Also -= would still like to see a White version with the colors Dark Blue, ICE BLue and Grey (lighter Grey) utilized... similiar to the first one you did

Maybe try spacing the boat a little farther away from the text as well... and lets try one versoin with a THIN BOX around the graphic that sort of goes Behind the text... I will try a mock up...

This is noce... but change the TAN Color to a White... and keep the light brown... also lets try these fonts:

Trajan Pro (very close, used often in luxury and formal contexts)

Garamond (Adobe Garamond, EB Garamond) – elegant with similar proportions

Bodoni – has a strong contrast and sharp serifs

Didot – refined, high-contrast serif style

please check my revisions #594 #595 #596,
If there are any shortcomings, please do not hesitate to send feedback again,
regards :)

how about this?

Also try this version with a Black Background - and stack the graphic on TOP of the text - use white lines for the boat but with a light brown (TEAK Color) for the top left curve (the top front of the boat ) which mimics a Teak Toe Rail on the front of the boat...

oke :)

Can you try using thinner lines on the boat graphic - I really like the stylized look of it - you nailed that... les try some stronger, more classic fonts - something with less of a modern feel - but no Serifs...

how about this?

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