Primo Yachts of Palm BeachLogo Design Contest

#754

Thank you for the feedback. In this version, I pushed further to give the logo a refined Italian elegance and timeless class.

You were better with this design of the logo... I like the simpler waves here... not the new ones you provided... and the nice contrast between the left and r8ghtbs8denof the boat in the logo. It works... play with the fonts only... try something more Italianand class8c for the Primo Yachts... nothing modern amd rounded just more of a firm clean bold classic font... and for the Of Palm Beach... try a couple of variations with a soft thin flowy Script font with large looping letters for the P and B...

I’d like to request the opportunity to upload one more design. I’ve committed to my daughter that I will give my best to win this contest, and that promise drives me to put in every effort. I ask for one more chance to deliver my work.

Thank you for the feedback, these notes will elevate the design to the next level.
Check it here : #737

Also - lets stick with teh white background... and Primo Yachts being Dark Blue and the of Palm Beach being a little bit lighter blue - not turquoise but more of a Robin Egg Blue...

Nice - can you stack the logo a different way and put the Icon to the LEFT side of Primo Yachts... may be better from a Web Site perspective... also - tone down the wave portion of the graphic - its too distracting... more subtle would be great! Boat looks good but could have a little more FLARE on the Bow line...

PrimoYachts Palm Beach now stands as a mark of trust, luxury, and authority. This logo doesn’t just represent your brand, it elevates it, commanding attention and setting you unmistakably apart as the premier choice in the market.

Thank you here is the new one : #736

Ive placed you in first so you can upload

I’d like to upload the final version for your consideration.

#701

Confirmed. Review it at #699.

I really like the Primo Yachts font you used here!

Can you modify the Of Palm Beach to be in the script Im looking for?

Thank you — please review it here under #698.

OK I have ranked you first... if you send me a private message I can show you a perfect example...

Thank you for the feedback. The last version is elegant, and I’d appreciate it if you could rank me 1st so the platform enables me to upload it for you during the selection phase.

Also want to consider again the lone with the line drawn between the Primo and the Palm Bach...

I think I do prefer the font you used here for the Primo Yachts - although I am seeing a couple of others I like as well or possibly better...

For the Script font - it is off... try somethign like the following:

Cervanttis or Patung -

This is good - make the cursiv efont even thiner and a little more "elegant" not so bold...

#660

#660

Review this version and let’s move forward with clarity.

Can we try this with a different color than the turquoise - maybe just a lighter blue but NOT turquoise... ... and the font still isnt right... the Palm Beach letters are too heavy and close together... something that looks more handwritten and larger and more flowing... Primo Yachts isnt bad but just not quite grabbing me... ... play with the fonts

#644

This is nice - but I did like having some of hte color like in the last one... I like the Palm Beach being a more subtle color... maybe we can even play with a more fun cursive font for the Palm Beach like:

Allura (Google Fonts)

Great Vibes (Google Fonts, slightly fancier)

Dancing Script (Google Fonts, more casual)

Signatura Monoline Script

Also - can you try some versions with fonts like the following:

Trajan Pro (very close, used often in luxury and formal contexts)

Garamond (Adobe Garamond, EB Garamond) – elegant with similar proportions

Bodoni – has a strong contrast and sharp serifs

Didot – refined, high-contrast serif style

#605

Great direction. We’ll refine the layout and explore adjustments that give the design more presence and balance.

Lets try making the graphic slightly larger... and maybe a thin line between Primo Yachts and Palm Beach... stretching Palm Beach out to fill the same linear space... play with that...

This looks good... can you try incorporating some light grey into the logo in some way?

#494

Thank you for the feedback. I’m pleased to share with you the updated version.

Change JUS the waves int he graphic to be the ICE BLUE color (gelcoat ice blue)... and make the Of Palm Beach a little smaller... more subtle... also try a couple of differetn fonts for the Primo Yachts - thing strong, clasic and elegant...