You were better with this design of the logo... I like the simpler waves here... not the new ones you provided... and the nice contrast between the left and r8ghtbs8denof the boat in the logo. It works... play with the fonts only... try something more Italianand class8c for the Primo Yachts... nothing modern amd rounded just more of a firm clean bold classic font... and for the Of Palm Beach... try a couple of variations with a soft thin flowy Script font with large looping letters for the P and B...
I’d like to request the opportunity to upload one more design. I’ve committed to my daughter that I will give my best to win this contest, and that promise drives me to put in every effort. I ask for one more chance to deliver my work.
Also - lets stick with teh white background... and Primo Yachts being Dark Blue and the of Palm Beach being a little bit lighter blue - not turquoise but more of a Robin Egg Blue...
Nice - can you stack the logo a different way and put the Icon to the LEFT side of Primo Yachts... may be better from a Web Site perspective... also - tone down the wave portion of the graphic - its too distracting... more subtle would be great! Boat looks good but could have a little more FLARE on the Bow line...
PrimoYachts Palm Beach now stands as a mark of trust, luxury, and authority. This logo doesn’t just represent your brand, it elevates it, commanding attention and setting you unmistakably apart as the premier choice in the market.
Thank you for the feedback. The last version is elegant, and I’d appreciate it if you could rank me 1st so the platform enables me to upload it for you during the selection phase.
Can we try this with a different color than the turquoise - maybe just a lighter blue but NOT turquoise... ... and the font still isnt right... the Palm Beach letters are too heavy and close together... something that looks more handwritten and larger and more flowing... Primo Yachts isnt bad but just not quite grabbing me... ... play with the fonts
This is nice - but I did like having some of hte color like in the last one... I like the Palm Beach being a more subtle color... maybe we can even play with a more fun cursive font for the Palm Beach like:
Lets try making the graphic slightly larger... and maybe a thin line between Primo Yachts and Palm Beach... stretching Palm Beach out to fill the same linear space... play with that...
Change JUS the waves int he graphic to be the ICE BLUE color (gelcoat ice blue)... and make the Of Palm Beach a little smaller... more subtle... also try a couple of differetn fonts for the Primo Yachts - thing strong, clasic and elegant...
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Can you modify the Of Palm Beach to be in the script Im looking for?
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For the Script font - it is off... try somethign like the following:
Cervanttis or Patung -
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Allura (Google Fonts)
Great Vibes (Google Fonts, slightly fancier)
Dancing Script (Google Fonts, more casual)
Signatura Monoline Script
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Trajan Pro (very close, used often in luxury and formal contexts)
Garamond (Adobe Garamond, EB Garamond) – elegant with similar proportions
Bodoni – has a strong contrast and sharp serifs
Didot – refined, high-contrast serif style
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