hey ryo -. Great stuff. -Can you play around on the one with the playbutton a bit and try some different backgrounds, no background and different color schemes -also...it's hard to express this. The guy is good, but needs to look more like someone who can get you VIP access/the character we described. I know that we're asking for a lot in a logo and things can't get too complicated but see what you can do. -Maybe also mix in some of the livlier colors that are in the ppt deck attached.
I'll come back with more feedback but wanted to reach out directly
thanks for the rank and feedback! Sure, let see what I can do for you. I working on it and will be back soon with the revisions. In the meantime, if you have anything came up in mind please just keep them coming. Feel free to share your thoughts so I can visualize it for ya.