The line in between would be better if rectangular and solid.
Remove the spark at the middle of the line.
The "S" in PRENDES is narrow, very different from the rest which results in a bad look.
BOCCADO has all it's letters well arranged and with a perfect size and separation between them but PRENDES letters look narrow and with too much separation in between. It does not look good...
Hello,
Apologize for my late. I just arrive at home. Yes I will revise if You give me a chance again. Because I can't upload logo at this phase. Only first rank can do it.
Hello,
Apologize for my late. I just arrive at home. Yes I will revise if You give me a chance again. Because I can't upload logo at this phase. Only first rank can do it.
Yes Sir, But I can't entry logo at this phase.
Only first rank can do it. Please switch my logo in the first rank for a while.
Many thanks for Your patience.
One more idea from one of our group is to have BOCCADO on top just as it is and PRENDES underneath but in the same bold typography and gold color as BOCCADO.
Yes Sir,
I will revise with double "C".
but the contest at finalist phase, so only 1-5 rank designer can entry logo now. Please move my rank temporarily.
Apologize for this inconvience.
and Many thanks for Your patience.
Hello,
Hope You´re having a good day.
Do not hesitate if You have any suggestions, revisions or anything, Please let me know.
It will be my pleasure to work it.
Hello,
Many thanks for feedback, It's really helped me. Yes sure, I already update with stretch letter "A".
Please let me know.
Once again, Many thanks for Your patience.
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I'll revise.Please switch my rank. Because only first rank can revise logo at seletion phase. Once again, Many thanks for Your patience.
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Remove the spark at the middle of the line.
The "S" in PRENDES is narrow, very different from the rest which results in a bad look.
BOCCADO has all it's letters well arranged and with a perfect size and separation between them but PRENDES letters look narrow and with too much separation in between. It does not look good...
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They are both the same amount of letters so they should be the same length and same height.
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Apologize for my late. I just arrive at home. Yes I will revise if You give me a chance again. Because I can't upload logo at this phase. Only first rank can do it.
Once again, many thanks for Your patience
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Apologize for my late. I just arrive at home. Yes I will revise if You give me a chance again. Because I can't upload logo at this phase. Only first rank can do it.
Once again, many thanks for Your patience
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Please remove the shinny point in the middle of the line that's between both names.
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PRENDES should be extended to the same length as BOCCADO
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Both the same size, both same color, both same typography, both with black background.
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Only first rank can do it. Please switch my logo in the first rank for a while.
Many thanks for Your patience.
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Please review.
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I'll do.
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If you have more ideas, I will be back to see them in 6-8 hours.
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Also, making it to be exactly in the same length space as "BOCCADO".
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Might also be interesting to see one without "1892"
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We think they should be longer rather than taller.
Maybe some other topographies...
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Because other designers protect the concept of the box line.
Once again, Apologize for this inconvience.
Best Regards,
Harsa Bachtiar
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I will revise with double "C".
but the contest at finalist phase, so only 1-5 rank designer can entry logo now. Please move my rank temporarily.
Apologize for this inconvience.
and Many thanks for Your patience.
Best Regards,
Harsa B
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Hope You´re having a good day.
Do not hesitate if You have any suggestions, revisions or anything, Please let me know.
It will be my pleasure to work it.
Many thanks.
Best Regards,
Harsa Bachtiar
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Please let me know.
Thanks
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Many thanks for feedback, It's really helped me. Yes sure, I already update with stretch letter "A".
Please let me know.
Once again, Many thanks for Your patience.
Best Regards,
Harsa Bachtiar
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Can you stretch letter "A" so it is the same length as the others?
Right now it looks narrow and compressed