Wow was the first reaction. We enjoy the colour selections. The font we feel is too hard to read from a distance for signage. Potential for cards is wonderful. The feathers are not our favorite. More emphasis on Practice less on loft. And we want the Wordmark to have more emphasis than the graphic.
Version 2 is too dark for us. We would like to see the word practice printed out as well. Version 1 graphic appears lighter more airy to us and we like that.
Moving towards what we were thinking of. We want the emphasis to be on Practice. Is it possible to have mehndi interacting with one of the letters possibly? The graphic centre appears heavy as two colors placed together. I liked the drum in the centre of the first graphic. Maybe a wavy circle surrounding a solid circle.