Powerful GuyLogo Design Contest

So far this is my favorite.

1 I would like to see the red brighter and elimate the orange tones. Stick to black, red, white yellow.

2 Expose the tattoo more so they know its me.

3. Im not crazy about the symbol and wording I feel we can do it better more like superman does.

4. Fold the arms and place the lightneng bold somewhere else.

5. Looking good though

I like the new look! Face the guy a little more striaght and add the name and P and we should be good!

I like the new colors on the costume

I like the tattoo showing

I like the angle of entry #10 better rather than the side profile

I like the outline on the head on #10 makes my hair look dark

Id like to see you put the writing up top left like this superman picture and the P underneath it. Add some black to the writing with white and yellow too.

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Entry 22 is the best. Just a few things to make it perfect

I need to see it on a white backround

I want to remove the P symbol all together - it takes up too much space and I dont like it.

I like the style and placement of the writing on POWERFUL GUY so dont alter it but dont like the Capital P with the lightening bolt or the colors - I think we should just add some black to it.

Other than than looks grea!

Ok we are just about there.
Entry #30
1. Get rid of the large 'P" completely
2. I dont like the colors of the spelling in powerful guy. Id rather the front be 1 color, but I do like the block look
3. put half sleeves on the character

That should be all.

#33 is the one 2 minot touch ups

1. I dont like the cut off sleeves - Make it like #10
2. Fold the arms like #25

We are done after that! Good job!

Entry 34 is the one I want

Just put the arm sleaves back on like entry #10. - for some reason you didnt see my last requests

We are done. Great job!