Thank you for your submissions, Sculptor! >>We really like 2 things with #3--the integration of the figure into the title and dropping the tagline. >>We don't like the font choice for #3. Of the fonts presented, #2 is preferred, but it speaks of technology to me.
A few other things to keep in mind: >>Although the figure is very well done, it is probably too literal for our use. We really like the #5 ranked Northern Lights design (your logo #41) in your portfolio. Like the fact that it is "enclosed"...easier to handle in different mediums...and the figure appears to be more abstract. >>PostureZone must always appear as one word (no space) >>We would like to see more orange incorporated
Thanks for detailed and precise feedback. I used to gravitate naturally toward human body but understand what you mean by more abstract. But instead of planting another "swoosh people" which you will surely have a chance to see in a full blossom in the last hours of this contest I'm trying rather to go back the concept of the wooden figure. As I don't feel much comfortable mixing orange with purple while staying on the "masculine" side of the slider I go to black present in your old logo.
The #4 figure is probably too "robot" like. Somewhere in between this and the previous version? Also, can you keep the "plane" of the swooshes, but make them more reminiscent of the BodyZone.com logo element.
Thanks so much for your work on this. I really like your new concept. I wonder if it is reflective enough of the BodyZone.com logo to feel like it's part of the same "family".
I also have concern with the color. We want to incorporate some purple if possible, though this is for the current www.posturezone.com website that is orange and green.
I really like the drawing of this new character. Could he be a bit less "muscle man", especially in the pose - It would be better is he had a more dynamic or active pose.
You do really nice work. Thanks again for your creativity.