It loos too busy in the middle.
Maybe make the palm trees taller.
Make the horse larger. It looks gray.
Try to make it look more like silver.
Or make it black with wider white outline.
Or white with a wider black outline.
Give the palm trees the same outline.
Loose the island.
Make the text stronger.
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Maybe make the palm trees taller.
Make the horse larger. It looks gray.
Try to make it look more like silver.
Or make it black with wider white outline.
Or white with a wider black outline.
Give the palm trees the same outline.
Loose the island.
Make the text stronger.