Love your Logos! A couple things, since we are putting this on "brown paper bag style" cardstock, could you please make the car yellow and not brown. Also, I think it looks like a jeep. Could you make it look more like a "Hummer" with the same grill in the front and a few more details. Nobby, detailed tires, for example. It is not a bad looking car if you cant, but it looks like a "Jeep". Very Cool!!!
You could even make the Hummer RED or BLUE, which Might go Better against the brown paper color. Maybe even "Army Green" for the Car, or Orange. Thanks!
Awesome, thanks for the feedback and the rank! Actually I was going to use hummer, but I'm afraid that take away the focus of the indian girl. But no problem, I will try another version using hummer for you to see how it looks. Oh, the hummer should be a convertible, right? because if it's not convertible, the indian girl will looks too small and the logo will full of hummer instead of indian girl. What do you think?
if you have any image reference of the specific type of hummer that you would like to use, please send the link here so I can make sure that I'm on the right track. SImply google it and paste the link here, that would be very helpful!
Making the Hummer Convertible is best as you say, so that the girl can be shown. Hummer H2 for your reference, the H3 has different lines. Maybe an Indian necklace or beads on the front of the girls dress or headband. thanks
Ok got it! Will working on it now. I hope you can be patient since illustration work is more time consuming rather than common logos. In the meantime, if you have any other ideas / thoughts, please keep them coming. I'll do my best for you
Thanks for updating the rank! What do you think? Is there anything else you would like to change? Just FYI, I'm using hummer H2 safari, so I suppose this type really match with your business
HI, Love the new entries!!! OK, heres what I am seeing that needs to be tweeked a little. The font on top "Pocahontas Packables", needs to be a "Bolder", "Blocky", "Tree looking/Branch Like, Woodsy", "Uneven" Letter type, looking like rough tree branches, dark brown in color. The little line underneath, "Bite", make it red like the little red you have in the Indian's Feather, and also make the exclamation mark red. I like the green hummer but anyway to do it in an "Sage Green" instead of the bright green, or a "Maroon", or "yellow". Is it easy to flip another color on it so we can see the differences. Since we plan to put the logo against a brown cardstock, maybe the green you picked is best. What do you think? Love it, thanks!!!
Is the light brown, square outside, part of the whole logo??? If so, could you encapsulate it all in a circle instead of a rectangle so we can see what it would look like. Thanks
Thanks so much for the direction! actually the light brown is just a background color to demonstrate how it going to be looks if the logo placed in the brown paper color just like you said. Is it too light?
Love the Designs!!!! We moved the ones we like to the first 5 positions. The only thing I can say right now that needs to be changed is that we like the two lines, going up the sides of the logo in #15, so if you could put those two lines on the first 5 up there so we can see what it looks like that would be great. I think it finishes off the "circle" logo that we are looking for.
Hey, received those but you did the lines on all 3 of the same design with the same fonts..... We need those lines done on all the logos in the first 6 positions, of which are all different fonts so we can see what they look like. thanks!
OK, I just looked again, you changed it by putting the lines on the sides, but you also changed the "three girls with a bite" to that one also. We like the way, "three girs with a bite" looks like with the one in slot 2 with the big writing underneath and the Bite in Red. Just put the lines on the side of the first 6 rankings and don't change the caption underneath. thanks