Thank you very much for putting me at the top rank , here are my new revisions, I hope that you like it , Please tell me anything what do you want to see or to change so that I will fix it , I really want to win and I need to win your contest . God bless you!!!
Please next time if you make a contest , leave a comment first of of the entry which you do not like so that we can improve it , not just removing it without any feedback. Thank you