Yes I see that. Could you develop this theme more? For instance, I didn't see the heads - only one has an eye. Could the column dimensions be changed to better define each element? I don't see how the fretwork can be used effectively so suggest you concentrate on 110. Could the left head become the P? with the right head part of the L? May be a dumb idea but see what you think.
Could #1 work with not fret, no slogan. Just a slightly more developed plinth under the P and the choice of the right font and colours. I note everyone is using black and blue. Is that because I chose those colours somehow? Or is it how things are being ranked?
#110 Hi The left head could be already the P - head. Idea is communication in-between both with column in the middle. i upload a variant. Thanks for your feedback!
#1 i'll work it out with a sans-serif font. People usually copies colour from best ranked entries. I think don't need to be blue + black at all. It's a cliché from "serious" business. It could be used another elegant related colour palettes with green or brown, by example. I'll do it with next entry. Thanks again.
I actually meant could those two heads replace the first two letters in in the text? The left head without the rounded corner did already look like a P. I probably prefer two square heads but like two colours. Could the right head form an L (with an L in it representing a nose? so the head is looking forwards?) with the base of the L making the right head feminine? The column and plinth dimensions are not quite right for me. could the plinth and column be slightly wider?
Could you try a couple of things. Remove dash from bottom of p. change eye in left head to match the right head. And change font to a narrower one where the image is the same size as the word. How would that look?