HI THE IDEA OF THE LACE IS VERY INTERESTING it need to be a little bit more worked maybe at the to of the lace try other typography for the text the colors are very good maybe try with greenblue colors
The 148 still the best you should keep pure style while drawing the lace, like you did in the 148 but it still need somthing the perspective maybe or somthing else can i see it positif on white backgroud