Hey, Please try to put the FF on the other direction.
Also the bar in the middle, and not stuct to a letter.
Also put a full box around it, or half a box, or something creative leave space for the bar to overtake the box.
Also please try using diffeent tones of grey and not black and grey. A very dark grey instead of black for instace.
Hey , try the "A" like logo #53 .
Also try the font that is more elegant, although this is better.
Try to make it horizontal and not Play above Offside.
The line try the middle between PLay and Offside.
Try grey in two tones: Play in lighter grey and Offside in stronger, or viceversa.
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No problem for the revision, but in "selection" phase, only the 1st ranked designer can upload new draft.
So, please rank my design at the 1st place, so I can upload revision.
Thanks!
Also the bar in the middle, and not stuct to a letter.
Also put a full box around it, or half a box, or something creative leave space for the bar to overtake the box.
Also please try using diffeent tones of grey and not black and grey. A very dark grey instead of black for instace.
Please see requested variation on entry #97
Also try the font that is more elegant, although this is better.
Try to make it horizontal and not Play above Offside.
The line try the middle between PLay and Offside.
Try grey in two tones: Play in lighter grey and Offside in stronger, or viceversa.