Play CloudLogo Design Contest

Thank you for choosing me as the winner of your contest.
After waiting so long :)
Is there a revision on my design?
If not, can you release my payment?
Thank you,

Frandy

I will send the file on handover with some kind of rounded font or you can show like font rank do you like?
Because if I send an example in the open phase get a warning or violate the ethics code.
I hope you understand what I worry about :)
Thank you for your understanding!

The smile is good. But could you make 4-5 different versions with diffrent fonts, maybe someone that has rounded edges? Otherwise this one is good, but would like to see some more font examples before we decide.

I make smile a little thicker?
What do you think?
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Is there a revision?
What smile is less thick?

We really like this one!

And like this?
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Like this?

Great, please make a version of this one where the clouds are centered. And also one where the clouds bortom arches start and end from the two letter "L" in the text.

Like this?
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great work

Great, can you also try and move both clouds to the right so the are above the "cloud" text, and also add a "smiley face" to the smaller cloud. Thank you. Maybe the size of the clouds needs to be adjusted a little bit to fit over the cloud text?

How about like this one?
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A small update, we are maybe rethinking our request to have children playin in the cloud, it may be hard to convey the right feeling. So can you please try and remove them and instead make a smaller cloud within the current cloud. And also if you can find a more playful kids font for the text. Thank you.

Can you please try to make the logo less business like and more playful. For example a font that looks softer and less techy/business. Also, make the kids look more like real kids, with less pointy arms n legs. Also please try without them reaching for the sky (maybe dancing or similar?). In general we want the logo to represent the product well (playful) while at the same time conveying quality.

This is my favorite so far, great work!

Or like this?
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Like this one?
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I really like the cloud now, and the kids look better as well, but I think if you make their bodies slightly smaller and the heads a little bit bigger, they will look more like toddlers. Play around with that and see if it works? And now when I see the four clover, I think I liked your old green sprout better. So just change that back and play around with the size of the kids to make them look more like 1-2 year old kids. The text looks good with all lowercase, but try and make play the same font weight as cloud. Thank you for your great work!

Or like this?
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How about like this?
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Great work. Its is better now, but maybe you could suggest a way to make the logo more playful? Maybe lower case name and in a slightly softer/bolder font. We still feel the kids look more like adults; if something could be done to address that it would be great.

How about like this one?
Please any suggestion for my designs.
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Hi, really like this one with the PlacyCloud together like that. So your are moving on to the next round for sure. But a few more suggestions. Can you make the cloud with one center arch like you have now, and then two to the left, and one arch to the right, but still have it centered, so the two arches to the left needs to be a bit smaller. And since the playpen is for toddlers, the boy and girl needs to reflect that age a little bit better, so can you some how make then look like younger children. Also the outlines of the cloud can be a bit thinner, so 2/3 of what they are right now. And the green sprout, can tou try and make it as a "four clover" instead. Thanks, great work!

Please any suggestion for my designs.
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How about like this one?
Please any suggestion for my designs.
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Great, looks good. I just have few things I would like to try.
I have uploaded a new reference image, so it is the last among the reference files, but if you can make the cloud look more like that, starting with the thin lines of the cloud from each of the kids legs, and then make it slightly thicker along the way to the top. And also if you can make the cloud more symmetric, with the largest oval arch centered above the green sprout. A bit tricky to explain, but hope you get it?
Also if you can make the cloud and the kids in a slightly lighter blue color, differentiate it a bit from the text.

How about like this one?
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Hi, I like it, looks promising. Can you try and trade place with the boy to the left instead. Also see if you can change the font to look more like the attachement logos, "green cloud" and "cloud love"

Please any suggestion for my designs.
Thank you!