We like your first entry and the fact that the image can be separated from the text and used independently. We are wondering if you could work on alternatives for the font.
#69 & #68 where your image height and font height are the same is on the right track. Can you try and vary the font size through out the "Platform" there all characters line up to the same height? Also feel free to vary the font as well, a sans serif font (modern) would be good to see.