we don't like the blue, maybe try a different color. try to change the font so it doesn't look like a zoom by/ speeding effect (slanted font). we would like to pronounce the card and make it more dominant. maybe try to enlarge the card so it's more clear were talking about a plastic card.
Thanks you so much for the feedback. It is so helpful and greatly appreciated. I've uploaded 6 revised entries. Entries #30 and #31 have the "slant" removed from the original font, and the card has been enlarged per your request. Entries #32, #33, #34 and #35 all have a NEW, more formal styled font for the "PLASTIC CARDS" text. Also included are a natural blue color (not the light-blue like the first blue entry), and an earth-tone green color. If you require further changes or revisions, contact me anytime.
I uploaded a couple entries which make a few tweaks to the current first and second-place entries. Entries #49 and #50 both have a slightly lighter font; a black "edge" has been added to the plastic card graphic; and finally the tagline has been italicized. If I can be of anymore service, don't hesitate to contact me.
I've once again uploaded a some new entries which contain a few self-implimented revisions. Entries #99, #100, #101, #102, #103 & #104 have a new font for the "PLASTICCARDS" text which is slightly more softer on the edges and meshes with the graphic much better. I've also submitted an extra color option (gold), and a version of the logo with the text centered on the card. You may contact me anytime.