Pivot RoomLogo Design Contest

Thank you very much for what you've already done. I love your design.

Can you make the serif on the T as close to the O as the I is to the V? Also the bottom of the R about that close to the infinity. Tighten the M in just a little bit, and put a little more space between the V and O.

Can you also change the bars to the pointed bars as in the original design?

Disregard infinity symbol request.

Hello Grace. I'm getting good feedback on this one. Two people have mentioned kerning. I imagine you would know what to try adjusting. In particular, visual tension was mentioned between the I and V. Someone also mentioned the other letters looked like they're floating. I don't know if that's legitimate or not. Can you play with the kerning to get it to where it's pleasing in your opinion?

Thank you Grace. I will look closely at those and respond as soon as possible. And you probably saw my recent request? Thank you!

Hi, sorry for the delay, I've made some changes in the color and logo, please check.Thanks..

Best

Grace.

I've gotten more feedback that this is a good font for high end. Can I see what it looks like with adjusted kerning to make it easier on the eye? And with no spaces in the infinity symbol?

I'm getting feedback that less may be more. Perhaps wanting a bold logo is out of place.

My only issue with this one is that it doesn't stand out much. Not the infinity symbol itself. But the logo. Is there any way to make it pop a little more without adjusting the infinity symbol? Make the entire logo a little bolder? Thank you.

Hi, I have made Infiniti become clearer, How about this one? Thanks...

Darcy: The infinity symbol did not stick out to me. Might it be made more apparent somehow? Although, tbh, this symbol does not hold the weight for me as it does for you, Mary. Overall, my brain interprets an infinity symbol as more science-y than spiritual.

Ill mention this is extra significant - the infinity symbol. That aspect is so important to me - eternal impact - I even thought about changing my slogan. But here it is in the logo. I do think this is attractive. Not being a designer, I wonder if it could be made to look more bold and eye-catching without losing balance and looking wrong. I'm not sure if it would be a mistake to mess with a good thing. I love it layered with the slogan.

I love the imagery created by the infinity symbol here. It figures in eternity. The impact I want to make is eternal.