When we shake the tree, the nuts fly in all directions (up, straight down and a little to the sides of the tree canopy). It would be good to see bright red pistachios in these positions. The "red" should be 'Ferrari Red'. The font on "Harvesting, Inc." should be a little larger so that it can be embroidered and be legible.
The Red arch representing the ground under the tree could be a little thicker and more pronounced. I would change the "Harvesting, Inc." to green color. It might be worth trying the "green" arches on the sides of the tree canopy (which are intended to show movement) in "yellow". Thanks.
Just an FYI - No rush. I will be leaving on my honeymoon this Friday and will return 7-12-14. During my absence I will not have any access to my PC/Artwork. Thank you. Steve
Congratulations!!! The shade of "green" in #107 is too dark. Remove all pistachios below the tree canopy. Make the tree trunk portion a little taller. Use the canopy style seen in numbers 107 and 108. Is there a shade of green between that shown on 107 and 108 that still allows the red pistachios to have a good contrast when viewed with the canopy as a background? In other words, 107 is way too dark and 108 is a little too light in terms of shades of green. The "red" swoosh at the base of the tree still needs to be more pronounced; thicker in its middle, and a little longer. Thanks.
Looking at #113: move the "yellow" arches up to conform to the higher tree canopy. Flatten out the swoosh under the tree a little. In other words not so much of a curve. Don't show any pistachios on the ground; make the swoosh very clean lined on top and bottom. Remove the "white" flecks intended to show the limbs at the top of the tree trunk. As you take some of the curve out of the swoosh at the base of the tree, move the tree closer to the word "PISTACHIO" so that the logo is not so tall.