I like the treatment of the P. I generally do not like the mixing of upper and lower case letters. Perhaps if the "i" s had some treatment- an arrow or a pin.
Hi , Thanks for the feedback and ratings! Here's update #89, #90, #91, #92 Let me know what you think, I hope you are on the right desire. I can not use the arrows on the "i" because it is used by another contestant Feel free to submit revisions Thank you! Truly