Pilbara for Purpose IncLogo Design Contest

Really like the approach - thank you. With the first selection, could you try a couple of incarnations of
a) the 'for' and the number '4'.
b) work with the lime a little more, for example, use the green for the word 'for' in the first logo
c) remove the 'line' that separates the mark from the type.
d) include 'Inc' in the logo as the correct name is "Pilbara for Purpose Inc".
e) I'm happy to equally consider Pilbara 4 Purpose and Pilbara for Purpose
Thanks

SS

Hi SS

Thanks for your feedback
Hope you can check my revisions for your considerations.
#25, #26, #27, #28
Really appreciate if you could give more direction for my logo design.

Regards

WSS

Hey WSS
Really like what you're doing. With your entry #12 - would you like to place the 'inc' in the design, and maybe deal with that keyline under the icon that suggests shadow. Not sure that will work if chosen. Really like that Icon though with the three 'people'. Perhaps a bit more work to resolve the weighting, colour and final shape of it. Great work though.
Thanks

P4P

Hi P4P

Thanks for your feedback
Hope you can check my revisions for your considerations.
#77, #78, #79, #80, #81, #82, #83, #84
Really appreciate if you could give more direction for my logo design.

Regards

WSS