pilates masteryLogo Design Contest

thank you for your time and creativity; I've decided to go in another direction.
all the best,
--tiffany

thank you for your time and creativity; I've decided to go in another direction.
all the best,
--Tiffany

now can you make the font feel more premium \ expensive \ beautiful?

agreed.

less splash is more; nice adjustment

cute!!!

hi Tiffany, i'm back.
don't know if my design still "on the right way"... but i send updates. thx

trying different layout

and this one with the words on the logo, but doesn't look good i think

hi Tiffany,
i'm back. so here is the update.
incorporate "teach empower equip" and "relax stretch strength"

Sleep well!! Great job!

thank you so much for the feedbacks!

i'll read them up and applied your suggestion in the design. will submit tomorrow though... i need to take a bit of rest. (but i'll keep designing on paper, even when i sleep i keep thinking about design... :)

ok see you tomorrow. :)

I like the est here - but my word vomit on the other submission is peaking my interest in the uniqueness of it

yep, like it - just like the other color choices better - pale pinks, lavender and teal

in my head, the p and m can almost form a human in profile - maybe she's cute with a ponytail?

and maybe stack the est. XXXVII in a more playful black with the p and the m to create an interesting shape?

what if the p was on top and the tail of the p was the center of the m?

wondering if you could have the words form the letter "p" and "m"
for instance, can the words:
teach
empower
equip
make up the "P" and
the words:
relax
stretch
strengthen
make up the M in the center?

you get extra bonus points for actually reading the brief!!!! great job!!!
thank you.
love your first crack!

let me know if you have comments

with blot of color

it's P and M from Pilates Mastery.