We like the clean vibrant look of these. The pickle guy also makes us laugh which is a good thing. Would like to see an option with a more expressive face as described in the brief. Would also be great to see your #13 with the words (maybe to the right?)
Great job on this one. You opened our eyes to some different possibilities in expressing the face. We like the "funny" factor of the pickle character you've created. I think he has lots of fun opportunities for animation etc.
Would love to see an alternative with a more expressive face. Also, as commented on your #13, would love to see #13 with the words (name of company and tag).