Not quite what I'm thinking of. the font needs to be thinner - also maybe just a bit lighter gray? Oh - and smaller - I like how it's the same width as photography, but size wise, "Leo Druker" needs to be 2-3 times the size of 'photography.' Now it's too big. I'm also not a fan of the inside white border - just seems out of place. Also - font might need to be thicker.