To dial this in further, please pull the bird's wings in and down a bit so that the outer tips of the wings do not go past the circle formed by "PHOENIX" and the black arcs below. this should free up some space for PHOENIX as well, as it feels a bit crowded up there. A little more white space around the letters would help.
I also agree one halo looks better. I´ve done revision with the other change you ask, please check and let me know what do you think:
- #293
Also these designs have a human feel. I drew them first on paper, only then I scanned the designs for my PC to use in my vector software, and turn it into a logo.
As always feel free to ask if you need more variations R.
This bird is strong because the wings have that nice straight line on the bottom, which creates a perfect negative space for the EST. 1996. It's also a more unique bird shape.
I´ve submited the logo revised for your consideration. Please check and let me know what do you think.
Also just and update, i will probably delay a little on my reply, because of internet issues caused by the weather where in Portugal, support will try to solve this, but they are slow. Just wanted to let you know.
Please check revisions done for your appreciation based on your feedback and let me know what do you think:
- #288 | #289 | #290
If you need me to work on more variations feel free to ask please. Here in Portugal is 4 pm, i will be back again at the end of the night and i can work on more revisions if needed.
I´ve done a studie on some great fonts, and also for the tail. Please check revisions done for your consideration consideration, and let me know what do you think:
- #279 | #278 | #280 | #287
- #281 | #282 | #283 | #284 | #285 | #286
Alright, lets work on the tail feather section....too much like a neck tie.lol,
also lets play with the font a little more, less boring, make it strong enough to stand on its own if need be.
R
(1) Can we see PHOENIX with a TINY BIT more character spacing to match AUDIO. (2) And please make AUDIO Bold like Phoenix. (3) Try EST. rather than ESTD. (4) Move the EST. 1996 down just a tiny bit. (5) Let's split the difference on the reds, something between the bright and the dark red should work.
I´ve done revision for your consideration with the red color value, please check and let me know what do you think: #274
If you want me to try another type of red, please check the pantone color chart, i can do it for you if needed, you just need to send me the reference, i will leave you the link bellow: http://www.pantone-colours.com/
Feel confortable to ask if you need anything else.
I´ve take advantage of my lunch time at work to revise your logos based on your feedback, please check and let me know what do you think:
- #267 | #268 | #269 | #271
When i arrive home i can work on more revisions if needed. Feel free to ask R.
Also, please submit a version of the design with the wings of the bird lifted up at a slightly higher angle. Compare to the wing angle in 249 for reference. Does have to be that steep, but the bird should be reaching up more with its wings to give a sense of lift. Thank you.
Please check revision done for your appreciation and let me know what do you think:
- #249
Just a quick update, in case you reply and i delay, because i will probably sleep in few minutes, since it´s late in Portugal. Tomorrow i will be at work during the day, but as soon i arrive home at nigh i can work on more variations.
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Thanks for the feedback.
I´ve made subtle revisions on the logo based on your feedback above. Please check and let me know what do you think:
- #294
If you need me to work on more variations feel free to ask R.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thank you very much for all the great feedback.
I also agree one halo looks better. I´ve done revision with the other change you ask, please check and let me know what do you think:
- #293
Also these designs have a human feel. I drew them first on paper, only then I scanned the designs for my PC to use in my vector software, and turn it into a logo.
As always feel free to ask if you need more variations R.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thank you for the update.
I´ve submited the logo revised for your consideration. Please check and let me know what do you think.
Also just and update, i will probably delay a little on my reply, because of internet issues caused by the weather where in Portugal, support will try to solve this, but they are slow. Just wanted to let you know.
Feel free to ask if you need anything more.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Hope you´re having a good weekend.
Please check revisions done for your appreciation based on your feedback and let me know what do you think:
- #288 | #289 | #290
If you need me to work on more variations feel free to ask please. Here in Portugal is 4 pm, i will be back again at the end of the night and i can work on more revisions if needed.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Hope you´re having a good day.
Thanks for all the great feedback.
I´ve done a studie on some great fonts, and also for the tail. Please check revisions done for your consideration consideration, and let me know what do you think:
- #279 | #278 | #280 | #287
- #281 | #282 | #283 | #284 | #285 | #286
Feel free to ask if you need anything more.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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also lets play with the font a little more, less boring, make it strong enough to stand on its own if need be.
R
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Thanks for the suggestions.
Looks better, and i love that red value: #275
I´ve also submited in the original darker red and a lighter one: #276 | #277
Let me know your thoughts about the revisions. If you need me to work on anything more feel free to ask please.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thanks for the feedback again.
I´ve done revision for your consideration with the red color value, please check and let me know what do you think: #274
If you want me to try another type of red, please check the pantone color chart, i can do it for you if needed, you just need to send me the reference, i will leave you the link bellow:
http://www.pantone-colours.com/
Feel confortable to ask if you need anything else.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Very glad you like the update.
And thanks again for the feedback.
Please check revisions done for your appreciation and let me know your thoughts about them:
- #272 - (red & navy blue)
- #273 - (red & black)
If you need me to work on more variations feel free to ask as always R.
Thank you.
Kindly regards,
João
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Thanks very much for all the great feedback.
I´ve take advantage of my lunch time at work to revise your logos based on your feedback, please check and let me know what do you think:
- #267 | #268 | #269 | #271
When i arrive home i can work on more revisions if needed. Feel free to ask R.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Just a quick update because i will sleep now, but i will be back again tomorrow and i can work on more variations if needed.
Feel confortable to ask as always.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thanks for the update.
Sure, please check revision done for your review and let me know your thoughts:
- #264
Anything else you may need just let me know, feel free.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Hope you´re having a good day.
Thank you for all the great feedback.
Please check revisions done for your appreciation and let me know what do you think:
- #258 | #259 | #260 | #261
If you need me to work on more revisions feel free to ask as always.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thanks for the feedback.
Please check revision done for your appreciation and let me know what do you think:
- #249
Just a quick update, in case you reply and i delay, because i will probably sleep in few minutes, since it´s late in Portugal. Tomorrow i will be at work during the day, but as soon i arrive home at nigh i can work on more variations.
This is my timezone in case you need to check:
- https://www.timeanddate.com/worldclock/portugal/porto
Feel free to ask if you need me to work on anything more R.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Hope you´re having a good weekend.
Please check revision done for your appreciation and let me know what do you think.
Feel confortable to ask if you need any more changes.
Your feedback is always welcome.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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ESTD. date: 1996
Try a sun outline above the bird's head