Took a big risk here and came up with this new design. I felt that the gold part of the work submitted thus far was what appealed to you so I thought to make it more apparent. After viewing the previous work, I thought about the upside down "p" looking like a "d," so I eliminated it. The font remained the same, including the new golden "P"
Hopefully I didn't discredit design number 2 in this process- the double P idea was an influence from fashion logos like Gucci and Chanel. It's worked successfully there in fashion a number of times and I can see it working here as well.