1. Please show this to me with the jagged line removed. I its place I would like to see the gray elips at the bottom wrap around one more time and end in the arrow you have at the top-right of the sohere. So, the gray line would wrap around like a helix and get thicker as it ends in an arrow.
2. Please make the tagline medium gray (cool gray 8).
3. The line between the name and the tagline: Pleas make this fatter in the middle and taper to points on either end. Not too fat in the middle. I just wnt it to look more stulish than a flat line.
revisions - not exacly what I had in mind. I am look for a revision with the gray line "orbiting" the glome 2x, getting a little larger each time and ending in an upward-pointing arrow. And, replace the current white line going through with a smooth curve that follows the new orbit you will put below it.