I wanted to incorporate all the phases of your work using text as graphics. With different sizes, widths and color, the eye is impelled to search, thus your design is well understood. The contrast in size and color is also helpful in separating the different pieces of information. I also tried to keep it on the classy side. I felt, from your description, that your passion for health & fitness deserved a bit more of a dynamic nature. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to design for you.
I like the concept, but I'm looking for more of a design with less words. The only words that should be on the logo are "Personal Training by Dan Melita". I also think the color scheme is too dark, I'd like something more inviting that shows professionalism and health.