Performing Arts AbroadLogo Design Contest

Entry #4
I like this entry, I might like it a bit more if we put changed the order of the words for more balance: dance music drama. I would also like to see a version in white that used: dance music theater (spelled the American way)

I like the white background but I also think it might be a little weak compared to the black. in most cases, this logo will sit on a white background. It might be powerful to have black or another color in there to give it strength. For example, perhaps a black band could go under the line and the words- dance music and theater - could be written in english in white...

I will work on that today for you.

Thank you,
Tere

Here are two modifications per your request. I did one with gray since the black draws more attention. Also, for an added choice I extended the bar under 'Arts' for depth. But it can be returned to its original position.
Also Theater and Drama have been repositioned for possibilities.
Thank you for your input,
Sincerely,
Tere

(This comment references Entry #19)

Additionally, if you noticed I kerned the letters to create a little more space for the repositioning.

(This comment references Entry #21)

One thing that may help since I noticed the last revisions may not be your preference....If needed the gray type on the black can be white and the gray on the white background can be changed to black for more visibility.

Thank you once again,
Sincerely,

Tere

I'm adding to my #2 the same variation as you requested as seen on my #4.
Thank you for considering my logo.
Tere

(This comment references Entry #58)

Telegraphics,
I think we want to select you as the winner, but feel the design might be a bit stronger if it could take entry #4 (ranked 1st) and make the words - dance theater music - and make them more visible (so maybe bigger or darker or both)

Thank you Rich, for considering my design!...
If I understand correctly this one I made the correction and thickened the lines on the font slightly. Please let me know if this is what you are asking.
Thank you once again,
Sincerely,
Tere

(This comment references Entry #78)

This one may not look like much difference but I increased the font line by .1 more than the correction and enlarged and repositioned for balance 'Performing Arts Abroad' over the tag line. I'll be checking on your response.

(This comment references Entry #79)

Here is the version on black..the gray is slightly lighter for the contrast.

(This comment references Entry #80)

Here's one with the pt size increased just on the tag line. Readjusted for balance on name a little with the adjustment

(This comment references Entry #81)

Here's one other possibility for you. I increased the height of the letters and rebalanced. Fonts are stil bolder.

(This comment references Entry #82)