This is looking pretty sharp. Well received. Few tweaks...
1) a darker blue and red. The shades of the
#1 design are spot on
2) really like the way the star looks outlined in blue
3) would like to see the word STAR kept red but outlined in blue
4) the lines flanking the shield....can we see that in red and yellow?
5) see the pic of the aircraft? Can you put those yellow lines on the blue portion of the acft symbol and the blue lines on the white portion. And maybe the blades in the same gray as the windows?
6) the 'feathers' of the wing badge....a lot of the guys here would like to see that
Your first design and this...night and day. You're looking really good here. Good luck!