i am really appreciate your feedback, its help me for give me the track, i have upload some adjustment base on your feedback to make more simply and balance for the layout
At favicon or social-icon scale, those little navy cut-outs at the bottom of the wings can disappear. Consider a one-color version (all navy or all orange) or a stripped-back icon (just the circle + wings, or just the peak + wings) for very small uses.
Unify the Barbell Style
The barbell plates are quite blocky compared to the smooth curves above. You might soften the plate edges or slim down the bar so it feels like it belongs to the same “family” as the icon.
Tighten the Lock-Up
The space between the icon and “PEAK LIFE” feels a bit generous. Bringing them a touch closer will make the entire logo more compact and easier to place in headers or on merchandise.
Gradient vs. Flat Color
I notice a slight gradient under the wings. If you ever need flat-color or one-color knockouts, test how that gradient translates. You may want to convert those to a single flat navy shape.
At very small sizes (favicon, social-profile), the combination of wings, peak, and barbell might blur together. You may want a simplified version of the person-peak icon alone for tiny uses.
Barbell Styling
The blocky plates feel a bit heavy compared to the smooth curves of the icon above. A narrower or more streamlined bar might harmonize better.
Balance of Elements
Right now the icon feels top-heavy. You could slightly reduce its scale or bring the text and icon a touch closer together to tighten the lock-up.
Color Flexibility
Test a one-color (all–navy or all–orange) and a reversed treatment on dark backgrounds to make sure none of the small white cutouts (in the peak) disappear.
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Simplify for Small Sizes
At favicon or social-icon scale, those little navy cut-outs at the bottom of the wings can disappear. Consider a one-color version (all navy or all orange) or a stripped-back icon (just the circle + wings, or just the peak + wings) for very small uses.
Unify the Barbell Style
The barbell plates are quite blocky compared to the smooth curves above. You might soften the plate edges or slim down the bar so it feels like it belongs to the same “family” as the icon.
Tighten the Lock-Up
The space between the icon and “PEAK LIFE” feels a bit generous. Bringing them a touch closer will make the entire logo more compact and easier to place in headers or on merchandise.
Gradient vs. Flat Color
I notice a slight gradient under the wings. If you ever need flat-color or one-color knockouts, test how that gradient translates. You may want to convert those to a single flat navy shape.
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Icon Complexity vs. Scale
At very small sizes (favicon, social-profile), the combination of wings, peak, and barbell might blur together. You may want a simplified version of the person-peak icon alone for tiny uses.
Barbell Styling
The blocky plates feel a bit heavy compared to the smooth curves of the icon above. A narrower or more streamlined bar might harmonize better.
Balance of Elements
Right now the icon feels top-heavy. You could slightly reduce its scale or bring the text and icon a touch closer together to tighten the lock-up.
Color Flexibility
Test a one-color (all–navy or all–orange) and a reversed treatment on dark backgrounds to make sure none of the small white cutouts (in the peak) disappear.
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