Congratulations on being the first designer to submit to my tournament! I like #3 the most because of the simplicity; use of the pause symbol is clever. Overall, I don't like the shade of green; it's too teal. I prefer a more perky green. Are you sure you're using Pantone 355? Can you lighten the green shade? Entries #3 & #4 are my favorites because of the use of the lotus flower, which is close to my heart. The font of these entries is also crisp & I think will show up nicely on print materials and signage. However, I would like to see a combination of the #3 graphic with the #1 font. Entry #1 has too much white space, not enough color. I prefer the large flower to the large seated figure. Thanks!
I definitely like the new green color. I prefer the pause symbol to the seated person in the logo, so take that out. Entry #5 is my favorite with the colors, the font, the lotus, and the pause symbol. I don't like small 'PAUSE' and big 'YOGA', as in entries #6 - #10.
#5 any feedback / revisions about it Sir? Does this fit with your concept? Or what could I have developed from this design?
please answer as much detail as possible, for example about the font, color, proportion design or other things that you think will make your design better.
I'm curious about the shape of entry #6 as it is more square overall & might do well in a variety of print & online media, as well as physical signage. I like the multi-color of entry #5. Please show me 'PAUSE YOGA' in all blue as an option. I'll check in again tomorrow. Thank you!
In entry #6, I don't like that 'pause' is smaller than 'yoga'. I do, however, like the use of upper case letters. The font in all of your entries is nice, but I don't like the shape of the lower case 'g'; it looks like an 's'. I prefer the shape of the upper case 'G'. I like the all blue letters in entry #12.
I like entry #5 but with all blue letters as in #12. Can you please try a different font? With the current font the lower case 'g' looks very similar to a lower case 's'.
Entry #51 font is too skinny and too stylized; prefer less script-like font and more print-like. The font for #50 might be good. What about changing the 'P' and the 'Y' to upper case in the #50 font?