Regarding your second entry, I don't like that little geometric design next to the name as it doesn't relate to either the name or the art. I can see that you put it there because I said I prefer geometric rather than curly/flowing, but I was referring to the actual lettering (and you captured that)
The funkier everyone's entries get, the more conservative I am becoming. Could you try #11, with regular As, and bolder fonds (similar to your 37, but letters a little wider apart)? Also, could you give me a version with white letters and also one with some type of silver or platinum? Nothing gaudy or flashy….thanks