I really want their faces to be less real life-like and more like the character-ish of the 121019.jpg that I attached. it says Patacake_kids logo.jpg also Their hair needs to be a lighter and I need a more substantial font with the light brown shading behind it. Make the inner black circle around them, thinner.
This is a contender, but going back to the information I put in the ideas section. Focusing on changing the faces to more character-like instead of real life. I am trying to decide if I like the name at the bottom like this vs the other logo you submitted where its all in a circle, both are viable options. I like the angles of their bodies, the 2 younger ones holding the plate, their clothing is good and the colors. I think their faces just need some tweaking to again, maybe not so real-life but more character like the other files I have attached. I like the boys hair style here. can you lighten up his eyebrows and hair a tiny bit and the youngest daughters middle part of her hair. Need a square pat of butter on the pancakes
Hi there!Hi. I have updated the ideas and information section to better describe what I am looking for. Hopefully its just a few easy tweaks from the "screenshot" and ai file attached. A freelancer had started on this, but just couldnt get the character-like faces just right. Please see the details I put in there. Yours is the closest to the files, I will say. Maybe a little different font, and less real like looking faces(but character looking faces), have the younger 2 looking at the pancakes, the boy sticking a finger in the syrup to get ready to taste it, a square pat of butter on top of the pancakes, the boy smile is closed while the girls smiles are open and excited like the screenshot file, and their eyebrows a bit lighter. Can you do the girls hair like the screenshot file(i like the boys hair you have here, maybe a smidge lighter)
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