awesome. Very last thing we just noticed, this eye on the youngest girl that I circled, its more oval sideways than her other eye. please bring it down just a slight amt and make the blue in the eye cover some of the white of it. after this adjustment is corrected, I will be ready to call the contest :0)
hello, here is the design with the requested changes, straighten more the hair marked on the girl and return to the same eyes of the boy from #37, also adjust the separation of the letters in "KIDS" let me know any details
ok, we like the boys eyes in #37 and smooth the little girls hair down right where I marked it(like take out that small area of her hair that sticks out) and we are THERE!!! YAYYY
hello, here is the design, I reduced the outside of the little girl's hair a little more, I raised the eyes up on the boy, was it like that?? let me know any details
The oldest girl is perfect! The little girl, just take a bit off of her hair ontop to make it less poofy(that dark top area is what i was meaning. The blue pupil of the boy, I want to see what they look like when you extend the blue in his eyes up to the top of the eyelid(so just bring the blue part straight up, not put to the sides though.
Hello, here is the design with the requested changes marked in the last image, let me know if I come close to something or I make a mistake again haha, I am attentive again.
I'd like to see what it looks like with the iris(blue part) looks like when you bring it straight down in the eye to fill in the white gap directly below it(not to each side of the eyeball though? take that far out dark strip of the girls hair(to help her head look a little smaller). I noticed the oldest girl, her shirt gaps here now that the neck was edited.
I feel like once we get this done, we will be there!
take that top darker brown streak of hair off of the little girl, to help make her hair not as poofy. Lastly, what does it look like if the kids blue iris of the eye is brought down to close in that white gap of the eyball. I just want to see how that looks. I am getting excited, this is so so close :0)
I'm going to stare and ponder at these eyes to see if they could be it. On both girls on their upper lid of their eye on the ends, can you put 3 wisps of small eyelashes curling up to make them look more feminine. Can you scoot the word patacakes together just slightly but without the letters touching, just like the spacing in the word kids(kids spacing is great) Does "kids" need shifting to the right ever so tiny amt? or is that my eyes? Bring the jaw line in a tiny amt on the girls on that right side with the arrow pointing to that area
After I see what that looks like, if this next one doesn't look right, I may have you go back to this one and just bring the corners of all 3 of their eyes inward just a tiny amt to be not as oval-shaped and more round
The boys arm looks great!Can you try these eyes that I just added these files to try to see what they look like: screenshot 144516 and screenshot 144806 jpg that I uploaded. The youngest girl, can you shorten her head from her forehead hairline down a tiny amt. Her head is still just a small amt too big. Can you remove the orange spot under the girls nostrils please
Hello, here is the design with all the requested changes, let me know if it was what you had in mind, I reduced the size of the eyes, changed the boy's arm to the one to hold the plate, ovalize the older girl's face a little more and minor, I am attentive to your comments!
yes no problem, now that I see it I notice the older girl's face more oval, I'm sorry, if I make the child's arm hold the plate and that way you can see the difference with the other, no problem
I'm sorry to mention this, we were discussing and would it be too difficult to change the boys arm to just holding the plate like the small girl? Its a bit difficult to tell that he's tasting the syrup, so we'd like to see what he looks like holding the plate instead with that one hand and take out the thumbs on the plate from the oldest girl.
The angle of the youngest girl looks much better. Can you make her head just a little bit smaller or less oblong? Can I see what all 3 of the kids eyes look like if they are a tiny bit smaller? When I first look at it, their eyes are what pop out the first thing. Is the word "kids" lined up evenly left to right? The oldest girl can you bring her jaw line in on each side a little bit more, it still looks too full
hello here is the modified design, slightly turn the face of the smallest girl looking towards the cake with the same elements (eyes, nose, eyebrow and mouth) of the same girl from the screenshot, there are the black lines of the chin , I also reduced the size of the head of the smallest girl, was that what you had in mind?? tell me any details I'm missing!
hello here is the modified design on the chin, mark the black line or outline, I also reduced the size of the smaller girl, I'm still working on turning the smaller girl towards the pancakes
Great edits, I think we're almost there! Can you bring the girls jawline & chin in to be a little sharper and outline with a thin black line like the screenshot file has and would there be anyway to turn the little girls head just a little towards the pancakes so it doesnt look like her head is facing straight but only her eyes are looking at the pancakes? Shrink her head to make it look slightly smaller(i feel its too big for her body still. can you maybe bring in the girls eyes to be slightly smaller. I'd like to see what it looks like with their eyes oval like you have here and a separate logo where their eyes are the same shape configuration of the boys(but making slightly smaller).
Please change the aprons back to white. I dont need more pancakes, please go back to the same stack of pancakes as the previous. The girls heads are still way to long or big, they dont match up to the size of the boy. Are you able to make their faces look just like the screenshot_20220315 file. Please make one finger stick out on the boys hand like he's sampling the syrup. The oldest girls hands around the plate look comically large
The font is way too far apart now. I just dont want the letters touching, the thickness of the word "kids" isnt as thick as the font as "patacakes" please make them the same.
Boy-Dont change the direction the kids are facing, that part is great. The boy is good except his eyes, nose and mouth, and that 1 finger needs to be touching the syrup.
Girls- Change everything on their face(shape, eyes, nose, mouth) to look like that screenshot_20220315. I just feel like that makes them look alot cuter. and the girls large looking hands around the plate(its ok if her hands arent there and we can still assume they are all holding it together
please make the oldest girls hair band to be the same color orange as her shirt and the youngest girl where her hair is parted on the side, not the middle
Can you make it to where the other letters are not touching each other, create a space like the P and the A have in between them and lighten the grey background just a bit
oh this is much better. I dont like the tongue sticking out on the boy, just give him a closed smile, the size of the pancakes looks a little big(maybe make them a little smaller) and the girls heads look too big for their bodies, maybe bring their chins more to a point or streamline their chins. Can you make the eyes on the girls the same shape as the boys eyes and if possible reflect that they are holding the plate.
Hi. I have updated the ideas and information section to better describe what I am looking for. Hopefully its just a few easy tweaks from the "screenshot" and ai file attached. A freelancer had started on this, but just couldnt get the character-like faces just right. Please see the details I put in there.
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make the girls necks slightly more narrow like the screenshot_20220315 and add in length just a very small amt.
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#the aprons are blank
#adjust the separation between the "patacakes" font
#the boy plays the syrup
#new little girl face design
#measure the equal proportion of the 3 boys
#the smallest girl holds the plate of pancakes a little
let me know any details
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The font is way too far apart now. I just dont want the letters touching, the thickness of the word "kids" isnt as thick as the font as "patacakes" please make them the same.
Boy-Dont change the direction the kids are facing, that part is great. The boy is good except his eyes, nose and mouth, and that 1 finger needs to be touching the syrup.
Girls- Change everything on their face(shape, eyes, nose, mouth) to look like that screenshot_20220315. I just feel like that makes them look alot cuter. and the girls large looking hands around the plate(its ok if her hands arent there and we can still assume they are all holding it together
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