Party On PillLogo Design Contest

Needs to be "The #1 After Party Supplement" instead of words Number One
Can you make the lines coming out of the "O" more prominent almost like rays of sun

hi, thanks for the feedback, i can do that,
but in judging mode only ranked first can submit an update design,
thankyou, :-)

pungky

I made your entry number one so you can submit revisions

thanks

Kind of want something in between a disco ball and sun that could be either maybe

hi thankyou for giving me a chance to submit the update design,

update are ready, some diference in color, sun size , and disco ball,

feel free to coments, and request, thankyou,

#218 less sun light
#224 less sun light, with different color
#223 less sun light, with different color & layout
#222 223 less sun light, with bold font
#219 many sun light
#225 many sun light & larger
#226, #221, #220 new concept

Thank you for the additional options

I like the design but the colors are too busy, can you do a couple of other color options maybe similar to #226

Can you try perhaps getting the smaller type onto two lines instead of 3

hi, colors update are ready, and some changes in layouting
le me know if theres something you want to change in the desgin, thankyou