Thanks - # 17 is an interesting idea, only the big hand looks a little odd. Is there a way to integrate the hands into the type so it's not 2 separate thoughts?
another look at a hand written typeface, no coffee stain - the torn piece of paper is your idea ;) is it the font you think is "childish"? - I was going for hand written/marker & it wasn't too far off from what you have in the 1 spot at this moment... the coffee stain was to convey a grown up person, with kids, in a rush... kids, life, stress, etc... isn't that something you wanted to play into?