#16 nice placement and spacing of the tagline! also I like the emphasis on Parent Clubs in relation to ON BOARD. Could you play with some other fonts for "Parent Clubs" and try it with a banner?
for colors - we are hoping to have something more light and airy, with more use of white and neutrals, and use bright colors for POP.
#44 I like the design, but the black boarder is too heavy and dark, would you consider reworking it w/o the black? Otherwise I like the colors. Is there a way to give the design some more depth and texture, while keeping it light and airy?