Parent Clubs On BoardLogo Design Contest

Cute designs, but we are looking for something more fresh, clean and modern - with more white space and pops of color.

I'd like to see what else you can do! Thanks for your work!

Hi there, the shape is still a little busy and it feels a little retro. The cursive font is hard to read, can you work on simplifying and experimenting with a different more simple shape?

Hi,
Thank you for the feedback, i appreciate it much :)
Okay will try with another designs according your feedback

Best,
Nur

update #6 #7 :)

Still not on the mark. Check out these two for inspiration: Dbushell Does Design and Montana's Tree & Lawn Service

http://blog.spoongraphics.co.uk/articles/logo-design-trend-showcase-retro-emblems-badges

From the examples, I also like: Baggie’s Brew Pub, Doc's Catering, Keith HomeMade Cakes, (and they all have 3 diff fonts and more words, and have a little more dimension, so I hope they will be good inspiration)

Sir,

These the update #8 #9 :)