Thanks for submitting, I really like #22. It is an interesting concept and it has the right nostalgic feeling, and I like the balance and fonts. Is there a way to modernize it by playing with shape and color to make more fresh and unique?
OK I can work on it a bit... I got the idea you wanted a bit of a vintage feel about it... I thought the hands connecting might help with the concept of the organization... will work on it by tomorrow.... carol
We are more leaning towards modern, but if possible we'd like to tip our hat to the vintage... **I know** asking for the world ;)
The hands connecting are sweet, but a little cliche. Maybe there's a way to communicate this message of connection and community more subtly in the design detail? Something that makes you feel something but you don't know exactly why... just thinking out loud...
Very much looking forward to your work! BTW, I see that you offer a lot more services... good to know, we just might be calling on you!
great... will work on the design... maybe color will do it... but am thinking of other options... where are you located? That might have some influence on the style.... I am primarily in the promotional industry and do design as a passion and hobby although it is helpful for my business as well. Carol
Interesting... so am I - in Cupertino... I will do more options - promise!!!! And hope I win but either way I want you to have a great logo and maybe learn more about your organization! Carol
Hi Carol, Thanks for the work, but I'm afraid your latest submissions are further from the mark. The use of colors is really heavy. Also I'm leaning against the use of the hands and figures - they are so overused and old-school. In my brief I attached a few inspirational logos that I think might better explain the direction.
sorry I misunderstood then... will go back and look at the files uploaded again... I thought you made a comment to change that direction... I can try again...
#45 I really like the diamond shape and play on the BABY ON BOARD sign. The fonts and colors are way off, too dark, too busy. The tree could be 80% smaller... can you play with this concept some more?
I hope you will still keep at it if you can. #47 - the use of color and font for Parent Clubs still read very old and flat... I'm imagining more white space, clean, simple, fresh, modern...