I see you are working with lot of designers developing different proposals. Not sure if you are still interested in my concept. Would be better if you just work with the winner designer/proposal of your project.
Also I was thinking to play with the slogan using a word-game with U (you) to make it more personal. That is one of the facts because I decided to focus my work on letter U.
Can you make any changes to improve?? The others are submitting a lot but you’re not very active. How can we capture the spirit of adventure and also business experience? Can you use the tagline Launch Your Life ?
Thanks for the feedback. Actually I can't find the exactly reference (Amazon Prime tagline) to check the coincidences. May you send me a link of this reference please?
The tagline is a little too similar to Amazon Prime? I prefer the U being the parachute.. we like the simplicity and playfulness, but also the feeling of support and growth
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Just arrived home. Would you like to work with me in the adjustments requested?
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Now I am out of the city visiting my wife’s family but I will be back tomorrow to update all your requests.
Kind regards,
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Informal Font: Adventure > CHUTE
Also I added to subtle tie to emphasize the business concept on the logo.
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Sure, I will give my best! Sorry I you feel that I am full of new ideas for your brand, let me prepare new stuff for you.
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Thanks for the feedback. I am working on new proposals right now.
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