Hi Kent,
Thanks for your effort so far, we're almost ready to decide but need the 3-day extension to tweak designs and get us to a winner. This is the feedback collected from the office and our focus group:
What we like:
Cute and relatable character, which is extremely important to us
What we don't like:
Still looks a bit unpolished
Angle on paper lines is slightly not straight which we like but because of the angle the lines look really wavy (maybe some anti-aliasing problem?) Try to pick line angles that look flattering, maybe with bigger spacing between the lines, or slightly thicker line width.
Can you make it look more like notepaper, maybe a red stripe on one of the paper pieces? Maybe a some nicer shadow between paper elements? For example, one of the front legs almost merges with the body without any visual cue except line angles being different, so it looks a bit distracting.
We're not sold on any of the fonts used so far.